Friday, 19 February 2016
My First Day Of School Description
Welcome To My Blog!
Welcome to my 2016 blog! This year I am Year 6 and my teacher is Mrs Graham in Room 20. This year I am looking forward to learn new things. Keep checking my blog and leave me comments!
My Reflection
I have been learning to write a description of my first day of Year 6. I have been using my senses to make the story more detailed and so the reader has a idea of what happened. I found this easy because I remembered most of what happened. My next step is to use my senses with all my writing.
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Well done Tanzee. You used your senses to add detail and you've included some examples of onomatopoeia. I do hope you were a little bit excited on the first day!
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